A Winters Night

• Artist: csifool
• Description: sorry if this is crappy.I wrote it a while ago.but I did try to tweak it a little.hope you enjoy.PS,this is were i got midnights idea from.
• Date: 09/05/2009
• Tags: winter

*sigh*What a beautiful night.The cold air reaching,reaching to my bare skin and chilling me bone on bone,the wind sending a chill down my covered spine.Oh how I love the looming clouds that fill the cold,lonely night sky,and the barely visible moon that for so many years has lit the pitch black sky.But not tonight.Oh no not to night.To night the still air is under the control of the dark,lonely corner we've all been in.............................winter.No matter how much we try and run or hide...Winter always find us,some were some how.

Comments

[zuniboy]

This is good I like it. Nice job here.

[meeleea]

I can definitely see the relation between this and the your Midnight piece. They both have the same kind of eerie feel. I like the contrast between the beauty of the night and the creepiness of it "finding us".
I suggest expanding your vocabulary a little (I find that Thesaurus.com does the trick).