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So Esther are you going to finish those waffle fries?
Yes Rachel you r such a pig!
Very fun-OMG he is so cute Esther look behind you.
Oh he is cute. Esther said in a hushed tone
I'm going over there to talk to him.
no your no-
Hey my name is Rachel.
Names Taylor.
Hi. I waved at Esther to come over.
Taylor this is my friend Esther.
Hey
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b]Tonight
So we hung out around the mall for awhile and he gave us his number and we started texted him. Then I get a text from Esther that said "Taylor asked me out!" I was so mad that I wasn't the one he asked out so I texted her back and ask were he was planning to take her. So then she didn’t texted me back about an hour later and I was already to go and spy on her date twisted . I know she would go to that new restaurant down town because that was the only good place to eat in town. So I called a taxi and got dropped off just in the nick of time because they just got there. I went in to this nice causally formal restaurant and watched them eat. Esther actually looked kind of nervous and reached for a breadstick. But just than Taylor touch the same breadstick she did redface . Awkward!! They didn’t say a word for the rest of dinner. So after dinner I followed them to the fountain and they sat down for a long time in silence. I was right about to leave until I heard Esther say "I had a really good time but I'm to young to date."
Oh....sigh. Listen Esther i really had a great time tonight and do you believe if you throw a penny in a fountain and make a wish the wish will come true?
Yeah sure.
Well my wish is that when you grow up and have all those guys chasing after you that you might think is the special one that you want to spent the rest of your life with i want you to come and find me because I want to prove to you that I can be that guy heart . After he said that he threw a penny over his head. eventho it was so romantic I was so jealous confused that as young as Esther was she was getting the guy i wanted. So than they left the fountain and got in his dad's car and took her home I assumed.
Next Day
We were at lunch and being me I wasn't very good at keeping secrets from my best friend.
So what did you do last night?
Hung out with Taylor why?
Oh just wondering....did he take you out some where?!
ye-
Where did he take you?!
What is this 20 questions or something?
Just answer the questions
yes he did and he took me to the new Italian one in down town
So Esther do you have any pennies i could borrow to make a wish or did you use them all last night?
Wait how did you know about that!!
Well i was trying to protect you hes bad news Esther.
Your just saying that so you can have him for yourself!! Then she got up and left in such a huff that I didn't even get my penny. cry
- by CuteAlice Junior |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/24/2009 |
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- Title: The Dream
- Artist: CuteAlice Junior
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- Date: 08/24/2009
- Tags: dream
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sawako kuronuma Destiny - 08/29/2009
- I think this is actually non-fiction. Fiction is about fantasy and about you know adventures and magic. Um.... You need to re-read the whole thing. Taylor is a girl's name and you need to express more of their feelings and let the readers understand what are you trying to tell or share. Belive me, I wrote many stories before but i have not finnished any.
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- Teramoto - 08/25/2009
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Not very well written, and everything happens in a rush.
No quotation marks (the " things), except in that large... paragraph... thing...
No capitalization of the word I.
And the replacing of 'are' and 'our' with the letter 'r'.
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