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The New School
When I found out that I was going to a new school,
and moving to a new state my heart almost fell out.
"I cant move to a new school mom,I wont fit in and ill be alone with no friends or nothing."
"Janellie just relax,Im sure you'll make plenty of friends and you wont be alone because your cuzin Lesly will go their."
"What! Lesly nooooo! my life is ruien!! "You know mom the we cant stand each other!"
Dont worry mi hija,"my mom said to me,"you still have 1 week here left,and i'm sure you'll have fun over their like you have over here."
"No mom I wont I hate this hole thing,...about moving I hate it alot!
" Dont say that hija..."
Mom just leave me alone ok!"
I left the kitchen and ran up stairs. As soon as i got upstairs I called
my best friend Stephanie.
" Hello, yea Steph ill be over in 20 minutes okay,
I have to tell you some thing important."
"Okay Nellie ill wait for you here."
"Okay bye."
I hung up and got in the shower washed my hair straightened it.Then i got
changed.I was wearing:some white shorts with a black belt,long black converse
with white lines,white long socks that had black lines,a black tanktop with white words
on it and some white earings.Then i got my green skate bord and went to Stephs
house at the end of the street. As soon as I got to her door she opened it.
"Hey Nellie."
"Hey Steph mira you cant believe whats goin on!"
"What dime,tell me!"
"Okay."
she went inside and got her blue skate bord and then we went to the park and Then I stared to tell her.
"Mira Steph,...this is my last week here,.."
"Noo this cant be happning!"
"Steph let me finish."
"Noo I cant here the rest Im gonna cry!"
"Im already crying."
"Aww Nellie,..we've been friends scince we were 5 and now were 16 and were..like
sisters."
"I know Steph I dont want to go"
Then we headed to the playground in the park.
And we started saying how we grew up togeather,and how if my mom moved to a
place then her mom and dad would moveor it would've been the other way around.
"But you cant go Nellie ill be miserable,without my best friend in the world."
"I bet if my dad were here,he would've convinced her to stay,but hes gone now and gone forever"
"...Nellie dont say that!"Hes in a better place now." "I am going to throw you a going away
party."
"Noo Steph dont i hate going away parties."
To Be Continued!!
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- by dominicanchiq123 |
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- | Submitted on 08/04/2009 |
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- Title: The case on the cruze
- Artist: dominicanchiq123
- Description: This is only a chapter i guess
- Date: 08/04/2009
- Tags: school life friendship drama action
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Comments (7 Comments)
- dominicanchiq123 - 08/12/2009
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WELL IM SORY IM THE AUTHER not u soo watever ill fix it sum other time!! - Report As Spam
- Kamalia11 - 08/11/2009
- If you don't waste your time on it it would be a horrible story. In Langauge it is permitted for it to have the right grammar or ppl won't know what is going on. especially with the paragraphs.
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- dominicanchiq123 - 08/05/2009
- gracias sis
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- lil_fweshgansta_chick_224 - 08/04/2009
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hey luv ur storys n poems
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- dominicanchiq123 - 08/04/2009
- i dont waste my time on that shyt
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- Hekibel - 08/04/2009
- Critiques: You need quotation marks every time someone says anything. Start a new paragraph each time a different person talks, so that it's easier to see who's talking.
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- dominicanchiq123 - 08/04/2009
- this is chapter one heehee u better like it jk lol
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