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Gunners #1Demon Awakening
Written by Dan Nguyen
After the escape of the DBF Hakuru met up with her friend Yamota Yamaha they talked about there memories and feelings but will Hakuru ever find her long dead family? Or will she purish under darkness
Later in Hadoken High School
Teacher: good morning everyone! Today we have a new student today here! Her name is Hakuru Sakura!
Hakuru-girl: good morning…. My name is Hakuru Sakrua……. I am eighteen years old…….
Students: hey shes cute and hot! I wonder what size is she?! Haha!
Yamota-girl: jeez…. I hate these guys…….
Teacher: well can you ask a bit of yourself?
Hakuru-girl: my family is long dead from a murderer and I am just nothing but a weopon that kills everyone…
Yamota-girl: augh! Oh crap!
Teacher: augh what?
Yamota-girl: *covers Hakuru’s mouth* I mean augh…. Shes saying that her parents died in a horrible accident nine years ago! And augh yeah that is all!
Teacher: well if that’s the case take a seat Hakuru
Yamota-girl: phew…. You almost got in trouble big time but hey atleast we got away with it……
Hakuru-girl: thank you for helping me introduce myself
Yamota-girl: augh….no problem just try not to tell them you’re a killer and stuff……
Later outside on break
Yamota-girl: alright Hakuru in this school there are a gang called Pevert Gang and they are really weird once they grabbed my boobs and started to fondle them then I kicked there nuts off and went flying he never came to school again……..
Hakuru-girl: what did you do?
Yamota-girl: I started to laugh my a** off that’s what I did! And it was funny as hell but they deserved it anyways you see those chicks they are hot in style! Go ahead go to them!
Hakuru-girl: but i….
Yamota-girl: don’t worry Hakuru! Just go to them!
Girl: hey watch it!
Hakuru-girl: ummm…sorry…..
Girl: you better will or for your going to get piece out of this!
Yamota-girl: oh crap! Wrong one! Augh! Hakuru! How about we go and augh well you know! Get lunch! And augh…*trips over*
Girl: AUGH! *throws a punch*
Hakuru-girl: *moves Yamota away* augh!
Girl: firing punch…this will stun you to hell….
Yamota-girl: oh crap! Hakuru! Shes been stunned….!
Hakuru-girl: *gets up*
Girl: what?!
Hakuru-girl: *wipes blood off* its my turn….. *jumps and does a double back kick up the air at her face*
Girl: augh!
Group of girls: huh?! She did a double back kick up the air!
Yamota-girl: Hakuru….you alright
Hakuru-girl: I feel much better now….. thank you Yamota…..
Yamota-girl: next time lets try and avoid thigns like that…..
Later at the other side at the building
Gang: hey come on now Kanomi can’t we just atleast get along……
Kanomi: no stay back! Stay away from me please!
Gang: come on! Lets hide somewhere so we can-
Kanomi: no!!!!
Hakuru-girl: *jumps out of no where*
Gang: hey your that new girl! Lets say we get two of these chicks!
2nd Gang: yeah!
Hakuru-girl: *does a double turning kick at there face*
Gangs: augh!
Kanomi: thank you so much…. Wait your hurt!
Hakuru-girl: don’t worry… I’ll be fine……
Kanomi: no really! I think I should fix that! *gets out a bandage* don’t worry I use to do this a lot *bandages her head*
Hakuru-girl: thank you but you really don’t have to-
Kanomi: don’t worry i like to care for people……
Hakuru-girl: augh…..
Kanomi: well I better be going now thank you for saving me!
Hakuru-girl: uhhh...…..
Yamota-girl: Hakuru! That was Kanomi there! And you nailed it!
Hakuru-girl: what do you mean nailed it? *blushs*
Yamota-girl: your blushing……. Well good luck with Kanomi!
Hakuru-girl: but Yamota i….
Yamota-girl: race you back home!
Hakuru-girl: *smiles*runs*
Later at the next day
Hakuru-girl: say…… Yamota have you ever like you know loved someone before
Yamota-girl: yeah but they all hate me they dump me and I get rejected a lot but love can really hurt these days so you haft to be careful to which girl you pick
Hakuru-girl: I see now…….
Yamota-girl: well lets head in the school oh and augh good luck
Hakuru-girl: augh…. Yamota!
Yamota-girl: I was just joking man…… besides Kanomi is one beauty for you
Hakuru-girl: why are you still onto that?
Yamota-girl: I don’t know…. But anyways Kanomi is right next to you
Hakuru-girl: what where?!
Yamota-girl: nahhh just joking! Ahhaa! See your in love with her!
Hakuru-girl: no I’m not!
Kanomi: Hakuru-kun!
Hakuru-girl: augh… Kanomi….
Yamota-girl: good luck see ya
Hakuru-girl: Yamota!
Kanomi: Hakuru I wanted to thank you for saving me so heres some food I made I really won’t eat this stuff for myself so I’m giving you this spare
Hakuru-girl: augh…. Arigato (means thank you)
Kanomi: well meet you again at the break!
Hakuru-girl: right……..
Later at class
Yamota-girl: so how did it went!
Hakuru-girl: augh…..it went…fine
Yamota-girl: see! I know you had it in ya!
Hakuru-girl: well I’ve never done this before ever since I was captured those people everything changed all I did was to kill and fight
Yamota-girl: don’t worry about that…. Everything is going to change!
Hakuru-girl: I don’t think I can…. All I think was to search for my family…. But they’re dead anyways so how are things going to change….
Yamota-girl: you’ll may have to forget about it…
Hakuru-girl: how would I remember my family?
Yamota-girl: maybe just remember the good things you’ve been with your family……
Hakuru-girl: good…things?
Yamota-girl: oh yeah…. don’t worry Hakuru this happened to me once…..
Hakuru-girl: it did…?
Yamota-girl: yeah……. but anyways! Lets just forget about this shall we?
Hakuru-girl: umm… right….
Later on break
Hakuru-girl: the air is so…good…..
Yamota-girl: enjoying the breeze?
Hakuru-girl: Yamota….
Yamota-girl: I usually come up here to look at the skies…. I always think there would be heaven up there…. But who knows man….. maybe there is… maybe theres not
Hakuru-girl: heaven? What is heaven….?
Yamota-girl: its where good people are….. people who…… has great faith and everything! It’s a great place…. If I die…. I don’t know where I be…. Maybe be eaten by darkness in hell….. or maybe at heaven….
Hakuru-girl: hell….. is just…… too dark…. And too much… blood shed……
Yamota-girl: Hakuru?
Hakuru-girl: augh…. Yes what is it?
Yamota-girl: oh its nothing…….
Kanomi: Hakuru! I know I would find you up here!
Yamota-girl: well good luck budy……
Hakuru-girl: Yamota…..
Kanomi: I bought some food! I hope its not too much! Yamota how about come and join us!
Yamota-girl: on second thought…… sure why not! *shrimp….octopus…. fried domplings!*
Hakuru-girl: food?
Kanomi: rememer Hakuru!
Hakuru-girl: oh…. Spare food….. I remember now…..
Yamota-girl: come on Hakuru1 eat some!
Hakuru-girl: I’ve never tried things like these before back at the….
Kanomi: back at the what?
Hakuru-girl: oh….its nothing really….. its not important…..
Kanomi: oh…. Eat as much as you like!
Hakuru-girl: Arigato…Kanomi-kun……
Yamota-girl: jeez Hakuru… lighten up a little man…… besides in a couple of years you’ll be marrying this chick….
Hakuru-girl: marry…? I don’t think I will…..
Yamota-girl: well suit yourself *eats a fried dompling*
Hakuru-girl: *sigh* hey whats this?
Yamota-girl: oh that… that’s an octopus…. Try it
Hakuru-girl: *eats it* its…. Alright
Kanomi: I can cook anything! But I’m still learning though
Hakuru-girl: I think your cooking skills are the best…
Kanomi: really?!
Hakuru-girl: mhmm….. its amazing Kanomi
Kanomi: that’s fantastic!
Yamota-girl: great job there….
Hakuru-girl: job? I’m just saying that because it taste…good
Yamota-girl: *sigh* well anyways I think its time to go
Kanomi: well I’ll be making some more tomorrow!
Yamota-girl: right! Thanks for the lunch Kanomi
Kanomi: it was my pleasure!
Hakuru-girl: Kanomi…. It was a lovely meal…. Thank you very much
Kanomi: oh it was nothing…… please come eat some more tomorrow!
Hakuru-girl: thank you…..
Yamota-girl: well Hakuru…. You’ve just hit the jackpot…… we’ve got lunch……
Hakuru-girl: well….. I augh… wait….. Yamota! Get odwn!
Yamota-girl: what?!
A star was hit at the wall
Yamota-girl: what the?!
Hakuru-girl: *pulls out a 9mm pistol*
Yamota-girl: what the?! You’ve been having that there! For the whole time!
Hakuru-girl: just in case…. These people are after me…
Yamota-girl: well for starters…. I’m joining with you…. *takes out a revolver*
Hakuru-girl: Yamota…
Yamota-girl: don’t worry… I’ve been waiting for this for a long time…… its time for us to kick a**….
Hakuru-girl: don’t get yourself killed….
Yamota-girl: don’t let yours either….
A girl comes down and a few men with knives and katanas
Yamota-girl: who are they?
Hakuru-girl: deadly assasins…. And very deadly….
Girl: my name is Fukina Fukio! I am here ordered by the D.B.F! to kill you! But now that this student is with you! I have no choice but to kill her too!
Hakuru-girl: she has nothing to do with this!
Fukina: by the order of the D.B.F! no civilian is allowed to know this!
Hakuru-girl: if your going to kill Yamota! Then you haft to come through me!
Fukina: so be it! Kill her!
Hakuru-girl: *bang*bang*
Yamota-girl: *bang*bang*bang* watch your back!
Hakuru-girl: you watch yours!
Hakuru-girl: starts dodging the blades and aiming them at ther emain points Yamota starts to dodge as well but aiming them in the head
Fukina: not bad….. but you’ll haft to kill me first!
Hakuru-girl: Yamota look out!
Yamota-girl: *rolls at the other side*
Hakuru-girl: *rolls at the other side*bang*bang*
Fukina:*gets out knives and throws one at hakuru*
Hakuru-girl: *scratchs face* augh… blood…..AUGH! whats happening to my body!
Fukina: body rate…. At fifty two percent….. the demon……
Hakuru-girl: what did you do to my body……..
Fukina: no we did nothing….. your mother and sister…… had it as well….. your mother had a demon inside of her but when you were born….. you had a demon inside of you! Your father never had a demon he was normal! But your mother was a freak! And you’re a freak as well! We research them and we use them! And sometimes we kill em! Because there freaks!
Hakuru-girl: AUGH!
Yamota-girl: Hakuru!
Hakuru-girl: don’t touch me! AUGH!
Yamota-girl: blood……
Hakuru-girl: AUGH! My HEAD! MY BODY! ITS TEARING APART!
Fukina: don’t you see! You freaks are not evolution! You’re a threat to our WORLD!
Hakuru-girl: AUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A massive explosion appears and Hakuru stands up but is covered in black
Yamota-girl: augh….. Hakuru….
Demon: Yamota…….
Yamota-girl: Hakuru…. What has happened to you….
Demon: my name is… Hinkyo Mythril…… and nothing in the world is going to stop me……
Yamota-girl: Hakuru…..
Hinkyo: I am not Hakuru……the once that use to be……and I am going to kill everyone… even you….
Yamota-girl: Hakuru…..
Hinkyo: *gets out 9mm pistol and turns it in an odd shape*
Fukina: augh! DIE!
Hinkyo: *bang*
Fukina: AUGH!
Hinkyo: *bang*bang* die in hell……
Yamota-girl: Hakuru!
Hinkyo: I told you… I am not Hakuru…. I am Hinkyo….. and I’m going to kill you…
Yamota-girl: Hakuru…..remember I told about heaven and hell…. What if there was heaven…..maybe theres hell…. And you said that theres just darkness and too much blood shed…… is that what you are Hakuru?
Hinkyo: Yamota……
Yamota-girl: is that what you really are? Answer me Hakuru…. Or should I say Hinkyo….
Hinkyo: AUGH! MY BODY!
Yamota-girl: Hakuru!
Hakuru/Hinkyo: AUGH! *turns back to normal in a painfully way*
Yamota-girl: Hakuru… its alright… everythings going to be fine…..
Hakuru-girl: augh….huh….huh…..augh….. *coughs out blood*
Yamota-girl: don’t worry things are alright now…..or is it….? *looks up the sky*
Written by Dan Nguyen
#0The Escape
#1The Demon Awakening
#3The Fight for love
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- | Submitted on 07/30/2009 |
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- Title: Gunners #1The Demon Awakening
- Artist: Hakuru-kun
- Description: the 1st episode of Gunners
- Date: 07/30/2009
- Tags: gunners 1the demon awakening
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Hakuru-kun - 08/26/2009
- sorry peoples if this is the one of "the" worst issues ever sorry im guessing this is a waste of time for all of you people although issue 1 must be retarded if all of you people think that im so sorry that this is one of the epic fail of this issue is althoug hi have other issues hope u enjoy but yeah this ones epic fail sorry for u all
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- Tenacious Thomas - 08/10/2009
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owned.
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- Tenacious Thomas - 08/10/2009
- I dont think its good.... its retarded as you are you spelled buddy wrong, buddy. This story is like you put sprinkles on a turd in an anime toilet.
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- A Cow goes Meow - 07/31/2009
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I had a 500 word limit on the comments so I had to continue here.
Anyways, compare your writing to the example I gave, and try to read a book about grammar.
Again, you shouldnt be offended by my criticism because writers need to face that.
Its good, dont get me wrong, its just the incorrect grammar brings it down a little. - Report As Spam
- A Cow goes Meow - 07/31/2009
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Your grammar is, and you shouldnt be offended by this because a writer needs to hear criticism, is terrible. I really dont understand why you're doing this, (and this will be an example.)
Yamota-girl: don’t worry things are alright now…..or is it….? *looks up the sky*
I'll rewrite it and show you the correct way to write it.
"Don't worry, things are all right now... or are they?" She looks up to the sky. - Report As Spam