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I know you.
Run. Run as far away as you can, and yet I will always find you.
You are mine.
Listen: I am calling your name. Can you hear it, blowing on the winds of time? Answer it. Come to me.
There is no escape, not for you.
You think to control your own destiny. You try to reject the fate I have laid out for you. You have survived this long, but no longer.
Your soul is at peace, when the waters of rage should even now be loosed upon the world.
You love when you should hate.
You guard those who fear you, and they grow to respect you.
The world showers you in contempt, and you repay it by washing it in light.
You are a blight upon my existence; your mistaken ways shall soon be brought to an end.
You hear me, don’t you?
Listen, and be afraid.
For I am watching, and the time has come when I will no longer sit back idly. You will answer the call. Your old self will fall in flames, and from the ashes I will raise a victim of fate, a master of the universe.
The darkness will claim you.
I am coming.
Your paradise is ending.
- Title: Dark Destiny
- Artist: Feriku
- Description: The title I just made up in this instant. This is a prologue for a book I hope to write one day. Please, read and comment honestly. Thank you!
- Date: 07/25/2009
- Tags: dark destiny
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Little Milkflower - 03/18/2010
- Whoa.
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- MeineLiebeBlut - 01/19/2010
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Das ist wundahbah!!!!!! lol i like it alot XD if you write the rest id love to read it : ) good luck
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- Pixelbyts - 08/10/2009
- Good job. :3 This really grabs your attention, please continue.
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- Errk25 - 08/01/2009
- Wow I would have to say that this is very well written, and deep and eerie. Continue writing i'd gladlt read more if you did razz
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- pythonesque - 07/27/2009
- I really liked this, Sam! It's really good! It was eerie and it made me want to read more.
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- Christine Devereux - 07/27/2009
- I got a sense of eeriness from reading this. Typically, for a book, you don't have your lines structured like that, but it's an awesome start. You actually have my interested spiked a bit. Keep writing! smile
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- Kitsune_Henso - 07/25/2009
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wow thats really awsome good luck on writing your book
i'm already writing my own lol...it takes so long T.T only page 80 T.T... - Report As Spam