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I walked along the rim of the water, carefull not to fall into the clear depths below. As I grew weary of pacing around, I lept into the dark blue liquid, my eyes closed, my smile faded. I sank to the bottom of the river, feeling depressed for no reason that I had known about. I started to feel pain, in my inner mind. I could hear something, off in the distance, that sounded like it was getting closer. A little girl screaming as though a person was stabbing her continuously. I couldn't get it to go away, it wouldn't stop, and as I heard it, I felt the need to scream too, like it was me who was the little girl. I felt paralyzed as I needed air, I needed to swim up out of the water for oxygen. But I couldn't move, and as air was slowly slipping out of my lungs,
I felt permanently stuck at the bottom of the body of water.......(tbc)
- Title: The Reaction
- Artist: Neptxne
- Description: ......Please tell me what you think of it, and I don't care of you don't like it.
- Date: 07/25/2009
- Tags: reaction
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Aryn Michael Flynn - 08/04/2009
- wow its very powerful, i like it smile
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- spazz3 - 08/01/2009
- um, okay... why is there a rim that you can fall off of, who is screaming, and why do your ears hurt?
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