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Prologue
The year is 2158, Earth as a whole has made many great advancements over the past one hundred years, yet humanity still had one important question to answer. That question was how to remove humans from the frontlines of our governments’ wars. Their answer was in a new scientific experiment called “ARCH 1”. Arch 1’s purpose was to bioengineer humans, to make the perfect soldiers. Arch troopers as they were called were part machine, and part human. Arch troopers have cybernetic implants in their brains. We thought the implants would only allow them to be controlled remotely, but we were wrong. The implants stimulated the cybernetic brain of the troopers to the point that the troopers were learning. The troopers were learning how to use the implants to relay information to each other. At first when we found out about it we had the troopers reprogrammed, with blank implants. We believed the troopers were storing the information that they learned in the implants, but we were wrong. The troopers were storing the information in their brains. We found that fact out a little too late.
- by Ixus Argeneau |
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- | Submitted on 07/13/2009 |
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- Title: Project ravens claw
- Artist: Ixus Argeneau
- Description: well i am looking for ideas, and i am open for criticism from other writers.This is the prologue of a book i am writing.AND PLZ COMMENT BEFORE VOTING
- Date: 07/13/2009
- Tags: project ravens claw
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Modern Lucario - 07/16/2009
- Awesome man.
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- CACTUS QUEEN 18 - 07/13/2009
- This is really good writing, I agree with the person commenting below me. Are the troopers feeling empathy or attachment to any normal humans? Or do they feel animosity toward all natural humans?
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- Darke Phoenix - 07/13/2009
- I found this very interesting and I would like to know/read more. Are the troopers feeling empathy or attachment to any normal humans? Or do they feel animosity toward all natural humans? The only critique I have, really, is about where you are going to separate this into paragraphs. . . .
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