Brother Youve Found Me

• Artist: Abused Miyu-chan Kato
• Description: Its about a camera guy who takes pictures but finds a mysterious girl this is chapter 1.
• Date: 07/03/2009
• Tags: brother youve found

One night when the sun was setting a photographer named Kouhei went to this mysteriouse castle. bats fluttered by as he entered the presence of the castle. he stood there as he held up his camera.WHOOSH. Somthing had flew by like lighting.again and again till it finally stoped.there sat at the top of the castle was a little girl. She wore fake cat ears and a long flowing white dress. she had llong purple hair that was flowing with the wind.He looked at her. "Wow", he said as he took pictures of her and the castle.

~ to be continued

Comments

[danni507]

uhmm............it would be nice if it was longer..and more detail.....it would have been nice if you kept the suspense..then put to be continued.

[The Ninja Pizza]

its pretty good! keep going!