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As the sun beamed on Jane, she looked up.'' my. it was quite humid today''. Jane was just finishing her chores. She decided to go back into the house and call her mother. Her mother had said that she should would pick up Jane the following day at 3. Jane was so happy to see her mother. It had been about 2 months since she had talked to her mom. So she packed right away. She could not wait.
The next day Jane's mother came a little late. ''hi mom, what took so long''? ''Sorry dear. i got caught up at work. Come along now''. Jane put her stuff in the trunk of her mother's car and they drove off. As they reached the house, Jane had just happen to turn her head. This strange guy was staring at her. She looked confused and turned away quickly.
Once Jane settled in she decided to go play in the yard. There was that guy again. He came up to her. Jane quickly started walking down the street. But he got to her. ''Hello there miss, do you know who i am?'' ''No i do not. now get away from me you creep!'' ''i am the owner of your destiny. Your destiny is to become a lady with 3 kids and an author. Come with me now''. ''Wait what are you talking about? I'm only 16! you cant tell me what MY destiny is. Like i said your a creep. I'm going home''.
With that Jane walked home. She had a weird feeling inside her stomach. Maybe she should have given this guy a chance? maybe she should have stayed in the house. Or perhaps never came to her mom's. Jane could tell this was going to be a scary ride.
- by CoolWhip-x |
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- | Submitted on 06/27/2009 |
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- Title: The box chapter 1.
- Artist: CoolWhip-x
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This is a story about a young teenager who found a box and transformers her into a new life. Enjoy =D
There should be about 5 or 4 chapters. i'll right the rest when i get back from vacation =D - Date: 06/27/2009
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Azrael Xavan - 07/02/2009
- this is really good. you should write some more. smile
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