a home for kitten

• Artist: erica522
• Description: mm... funny?
• Date: 06/14/2009
• Tags: hair

The kitten had no home.it saw a den."i'll live in this den,"it said."it's clean and
dry. It looks like a good place."

"this is our den!"shouted the foxes."get out ,or we will eat you up!"

the kitten ran away.it saw a cave.'i'll live in this cave,"it said."i'll be safe and warm here."

out of the cave comes a big bear.''grrrrrrrrrrrr!"it growled.'go away from my cave!"

next, the kitten saw a house."i'm tired,"it said . "i'll rest on this step for a while."

out of the house came a little girl."a kitten!' she said."i love kittens!'

the girl went back in to her house.she came out with a basket and a bowl of milk."here's a home for you,"she said,"and here's something to drink.please stay here and be my friend."

and that just what the kitten did! 3nodding

Comments

[Candy Katz]

It could be a childrens story. Not the best grammar, but its good. Keep on writing!

[RockOnGirl12]

Don't listen to them if you like it you write it this isn't their story it is yours ignore them and write what YOU want not them

[blaze dragonite]

and no its not funny to me...i like darker stuff

[blaze dragonite]

well she could write it as a child's story if you ask me

[XxKitty_of_DeathxX]

um ok i am i writer myself i write books for teenagers and my goal is to become famous thorugh out the world and this is a discrace a waste of money its just plain out childish