The Change part 2

• Artist: eiromeir
• Description:
• Date: 06/08/2009
• Tags: change part

she had become more faster and her eyes seemed to be life less as if the joy was sucked from them. they were red. she despised light and wouldnt go in it she always wore a hood. at lunch she never ate she just looked at me with a hungry look every day. guess u can tell why she infected me she loved mebut sometimes love can warp ones mind and delude the soul. she was driven by her desire to live with me forever and her desire grew when i broke up with her. TO BE CONTINUED

Comments

[neuschwanstein]

So-so. Capitalization? 'you' instead of 'u'. Grammer is ok.

[Master Super Ninja 12]

mad

[dark-godess101]

I guess it will make more sense if I actually read the first part lol Preatty good though ^w^

PS: check out my story eternal snow