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"No u cant make me do that. Its not fair. I’m not doing it."
"Yes you are Katelyn and you can’t change my mind. We decided this when you where born. there’s no going back."
"But dad."
"No"
"It’s not fair"
Kate ran to her room and slammed the door. "Why do i have to marry the depressed emo kid? He hates me. Just cause our dads are best friends doesn’t mean anything. Why do i have to marry Seth?" She cried on her pick little bed. Her eyeliner running down her face, staining her hot pink tank top.
Mean while at Seth’s house. They where having the same conversation.
"What? No. Why her?"
"She’s a nice young lady"
"I don’t care she’s so girly. she wears pink everyday and annoys the crap out of me"
"so you will marry her and that’s the end of that"
"Whatever"
Seth stomped to his room and slammed the door. "Ugh. of course I’m stuck with her. That’s just my luck" he said to himself. His stereo all the way up. He was lying in his bed. His black hair messed up starring at his pure black walls thinking.
They went to school the next day. Seth wore a black short sleeve shirt with baggy black pants and chain dangling down off them. Kate was wearing light blue jeans and a pink tank top with a red sweater over it. They saw each other in the hall way. Kate throws a note at him. It said "I hate you". Seth smiled and walked away. His friends laughed and thought he was kidding when he told them. So did Kate’s friends until Kate started crying.
Then during lunch Seth sat next to Kate.
"What are you doing here?"
"You dropped this"
Seth handed her the note
"I don’t want it"
"Whatever wifey" Seth said sarcastically
"Don’t ever call me that"
"Ill call you whatever I want wifey"
"Stop I’m not your wifey I hate you"
"Whatever" Seth said as he left
Kate ran into the girls bathroom crying. "I hate him and he hates me i hate this" she said in the bathroom all lunch and didn’t talk to anyone.
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- Title: i hate my fiance ~chapter 1~
- Artist: put on ur boots
- Description: um... its my 1st chapter and its my first try at a long story so please be nice.
- Date: 05/16/2009
- Tags: hate fiance
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Comments (4 Comments)
- put on ur boots - 07/17/2009
- idk when im kinda still working on it
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- Heartless Angel8795 - 06/15/2009
- SO FREAKING AWESOME. when is the next part coming out
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- -Deathly Destruction- - 05/26/2009
- PUNCTUATION should be your number one concern right now. Please spell our your words also- this is no place just to spew ideas, so put some effort into what you write. You need to put some substance into this story as well- right now it's just a bunch of inane whining and that's no good. Put some meat on the bones, if you will, and expand your premise. Good luck, and happy revising.
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- thehappinessfairy16 - 05/16/2009
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this sounds like it good get interesting, plz write the next chapter. O.O
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