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Lunch began, i walked in a steady pace beside her but not too close, i didn't want people to get the wrong idea. "This school has your basic cliques:the jocks, the preps, the rich kids, the outcasts, and the popular kids", i said in a sigh as if i was already tired of this place. "i was homeschooled by my mother", Asuka said in a deep tone as if she were ashamed of having a lack of social life. "well you wouldn't have to worry because im your friend!" i said proudly as we picked our meals and took a seat at an empty table in the back of the cafeteria. I glanced at her with a soft smile then looked down and started digging in trying to talk to her with a mouthful, not a very attractive trait in my part but gimme a break im being honest! She signaled me as if i had something on my face, i reached for a napkin as she did and our hands met, i felt butterflies in the pit of my stomach, my head felt light with passion. I looked up at her and she looked at me, we had a moment, a great moment, the moment i've been waiting for.
I snapped out of my second trance of the day as the bell rang, i stood up grabbing my books "yeah i better get to class"' i frantically grabbed a pen from near by and wrote my number down handing it to her. "call me kay?", I gave her one last smile and walked to class. The day went by quickly soon after that, i walked home to my tiny apartment and sat in my bed kicking off my shoes and turning on the tv, the sound of laughter and narrator of a local game show filling the room. I made some noodles and sat back on my bed enjoying the program, i jumped startled by the vibration from my phone and looked at the mysterious number on the screen, i answered with a questioning tone "hello?", "hey you its asuka!", i sighed in relief and bit my bottom lip "hey! its been a few hours" i laughed in a cheesey way. I know that came off as kind of desperate but i do like her...i know its kind of early to say but love at first sight exists, right? I let it slip from my mouth finally taking a breath "would you like to go out tommorow tonight, you know since its the weekend and all?", My heart was in my throat i expected a rejection, "YES I WOULD LOVE TO!" she said happily. "Really? okay well i better get some sleep. How does eight o'clock sound?" i gave her my address and blissfully hung up with her.
Skipping, The next day had arrived, I stood in front of the mirror rehearsing things i could say "Hey baby you lookin fine!", "no no no!" I hit myself in the head the palm of my hand then stood like a cool guy in the movies "Sup Asuka how you doin?", i burst out laughing at my own idiotic behavior and then kneeled in front of the mirror with my eyes closed "Asuka?", "What?" "Will you marry me?" Thats when i realized that it wasnt a voice in my head. "The door was open i let myself in", I stood up wih the feeling as if i saw a ghost "ummmm i........", i didnt know what to say. "Let me grab my coat", I walked onto my bathroom hitting myself on the head "stupid stupid stupid!", I walked back out as if nothing happened with a smile "you ready?!" "wheres your coat?" "oh ummm my brother borrowed it" "You have a brother" "I dont know? maybe, Lets just go shall we?", We walked out and towards the surprise i had for her.
To Be Continued........
- by Guardian Laryx |
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- | Submitted on 05/05/2009 |
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- Title: Escape[Part 2]
- Artist: Guardian Laryx
- Description: the second part to a blossoming romance
- Date: 05/05/2009
- Tags: escapepart2loveromance
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Comments (6 Comments)
- this username is invalid - 07/06/2010
- It's good, but it could be so much better if you took a couple grammatical precautions. The lowercase i's especially.
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- TC1998 - 06/27/2010
- how many other stories are you going to wright because i really want to read them
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- ii-MidnightAngel-ii - 05/13/2009
- awesome
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- Casta_Love_My_Name - 05/09/2009
- Where do they go! Where do they go! Where do they go! Where do they go! Where do the go! Where do they go! Where do they go! Where do they go!
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- gothic_beauty_695 - 05/05/2009
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fantastic you gotta write more
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- Rok0nSpike - 05/05/2009
- im adicted! wens the next 1?
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