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CHAPTER1
My mom was pacing back and forth in front of the main door waiting for my sister, Alexandria to come back home from the battle field. My mother finely gave up and walked over to a chair, she looked over my way and spotted me spying throw the kitchen door.
“ Sandra come out here or are you going to stay there and spy on me the rest of the day until your sister gets back”, without thinking I walked out of the kitchen and over to her side. Her hair was curlier then any other days and her purple dress went right along with it as well, some days she would look like a goddess. “ Why don’t you go to town”, I sighed. She looked at me with wild eyes like she couldn’t believe I just sighed in front of her, I looked away from her gaze.
“ Sorry, but there’s nothing in town for me to do”, she looked back at the main door. Then the door opened slowly and my mother stood up in a minute and was already walking over to it, I had to run to keep up. A woman ran in and over to us in a hurry, she was out of breath but was still trying to tell us what she had to say.
“ F-field o-on fire…. They need help”, she was now one her knees. My mother was already running to the seen, and so was I.
We got to a house that had a field behind it, people had water buckets in there hands trying to help put the fire out. I ran over to the wall and helped pull up the water and handed it to the next person and so on.
We stopped the fire from spreading anymore but it was still big and all we could do was watch my mother and other towns people put it out, Branden was by my side watchen it with me. Just so you know Branden is my fiancé, he has black hair that looks blue in the sun and blue eyes just like the sky. Just looking at him takes your breath away ( well it does to me), and the sad thing is I’m the only one left he has as a family or closer.
Rule one as a princess, you must never hang around someone( that just shows your week). Two even if you have a fiancé you must never talk to a man with out there or your parents with you. Three is simple, your husband must never abuse you or even raise a hand to you ( it happened many years ago. One of my grate grandma’s husbanded betted her to death, so they made it a law ever scents then.)
My mother has told me I didn’t need to worry about the princess laws yet, but sooner or later I will. But until then just have Branden by my side at all times.
After a few hours they finely got the fire out, no one got hurt or injured which was amazingly good.
“ I think we should go back inside the castle, Sandra”, I looked at him then back at the field. Everything was changing even though I am only ten and Branden is twelve, so many things have happened. I finely took Branden’s word to heart even though I was going to wait for mother to finish and walk with her home, but Branden is more then my home and I need to listen to him too. Many people in town have told me that both of us that it was fate, both of us love each other even if we weren’t chosen some way it would have worked out. I believed them to if we weren’t matched up he would still be the best swords man in the tower and they want gays that are strong to take care of us.
Branden’s mom and dad where my moms best friends and asked for Branden to take my hand when I was old enough to marry. My mother gladly agreed to there request, his dad was one of the main swords man in the tower and showed him everything he know. Branden is stronger then a lot of the man in the tower, his father was proud of him. One day there was a surprise attack from the Lion’s, there was only a few to live from that little battle that day.
- by Airi_Chan1012 |
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- | Submitted on 04/11/2009 |
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- Title: Life on the Battle Field
- Artist: Airi_Chan1012
- Description: I got bord with the first Life on the Battle Field so I made it where Sandra is younger and has a older sister. This is just a remake from the first one, if you do read this please tell me which on you liked. It will help me a lot on which one I should say with and write more. Yes I have a spelling problem I hope you will not take points off for that! @.@ I'm still not done with the Chapter yet but I'm still going at it.
- Date: 04/11/2009
- Tags: life battle field
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- Ninja Black Eyes - 04/12/2009
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The first sentence is a fragment. It has no verb.
"My mom (was or is) pacing..."
or
"My mom, pacing back and forth in front of the main door, (was) waiting for my sister..."
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