Blind

• Artist: OmgItsSavvy
• Description: This is a short sad story.
• Date: 04/11/2009
• Tags: blind

A blind girl detested herself just because she was blind
she hated everyone, except her loving boyfriend
He's always there for me
she said if she could only see the world,
she would marry her boyfriend.

One day, someone donated a pair of eyes to her
And then she saw everything, including her boyfriend
her boyfriend asked her,
"Now that you can see the world will you marry me?"

The girl was shocked when she saw that
Her boyfriend was blind too, and refused too marry him
her boyfriend walked away in tears
and later wrote a letter saying
"Just take care of my eyes dear."

This is how the human brain changes when our status changes.
only few remember what life was before,
And who's always been there even through the most painful situations...
I WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER..
PLZ TELL ME DEAR...
IN WHICH CATEGORY...
I COUNT/PLACE YOU?

Comments

[humpty_bumpty]

i liked it alot, it is really true how peoples perspective changes once they have what they didn't before, and that was a really sad thing to do to someone who was always there for you

[ll Music Addiction ll]

Really good topic, but you should work on making the sentances more flowly and discriptive. other than that 4/5