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"His name was John... He was born on April 3rd 1800... And this is his story from his point of view..."
John: "Mommy where are we heading to?" That was all I could ask as I saw the bunch of ppl standing their in front of me...
Mom: "Johnny honey we're going to see an old priest."
John: "Um why? I wanna go home!"
Dad: "John! Knock it off right now... See that group of boys? Go play with them..."
John: I was more than happy to get out of there. But I didn't wanna play with the boys. So I ran off and went into the forest. And when I was pretty deep in the forest I bumped into a lady. She was pale and every beautiful. "S-s-sorry lady..." I noticed that she mouthed her name and that it was Gena.
Gena: "It's okay John."
John: "How do you know my name?"
Gena: "John you're my son!"
John: What the hell was she saying? "Um no sorry I'm not."
Gena: "Come home with me? You can play with toys and I'll let you eat whatever you want!"
John: As stupid as I was I went...
Gena: "Me and you're father need to talk about you're human life John. We don't want to see you get older than 18!"
John: I swallowed and slowly walked to my new mother and father...
- by Vampire_Bella_Smith |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/19/2009 |
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- Title: His story...
- Artist: Vampire_Bella_Smith
- Description: this is a story about a persons life (Chapter one!)
- Date: 03/19/2009
- Tags: story
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Yan Qi - 08/28/2009
- Needs a bit more than dialogue. Has potential though.
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- Thorn Of The Sky - 05/15/2009
- This was kind of confusing,but itresting,tell me more?PM me?
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