The Day I Turned to Glass pt 2

• Artist: 0h Gh0st
• Description: This is the second part of my story. Yea, if you want to find the beginning look at sumbissions in petry and lyrics. I messed up....
  So, here's the second part.
• Date: 02/16/2009
• Tags: turned glass part2 pandascanfly jake

Victor looked at me in a very weird way.
"What's up with you, today?" He asked me. Nothing was up, well except I was glass. "Dude, what do you mean you're glass?" Exactly.
"I can't explain."
"Sure you can." He gave me a friendly punch and pulled back in an instant.
"Ow!" Victor exclaimed. He stared at me like he had seen a ghost.
"So... you're really glass?" I nodded. Anna still sulked. Victor turned to her and told her my situation. What would they say? Was I a freak now?
"You're not any freak, Jake." They both thought up ideas so I wouldn't be exposed. After all, I was clear now, and anybody could see the truth I thought up.
Wait a minute, truth I thought up. I would just have to think of compliments when somebody asks me something.
"That's not gonna be easy." Anna said pulling out her notebook. She wrote down 5 words.
The... truth... is... the... truth. So? What about that?

"Jake, you see, the truth will always be the truth. You cannot mask it in flattery or any other mask. For example, you can put a cat mask on a dog. The dog look like a cat, but it is still a cat."
Here we go again, with Victor's psychology bit.
"Hey!! At least I actually learned something unlike you Jake." We both laughed. Anna chuckled and continued writing down who knows what. Finally the bus stopped at Spencer High. Today would be chaotic. Everyone would know what I was thinking. Trouble, here I come.

To Be Continued....

Comments

[0h Gh0st]

Kimi haha... funny comment at fizz. yea but anyways this was just an idea. its not a work of art. im just working on bits of ideas and see if the crowd likes it. In any case that they don't well then it was worth a try.

[kimichan841]

I think it shows potential to be something good. It's slightly confusing but that's okay it makes the audience want to know more so they understand and will compell them to read the next part too.

@Fizz-and-Fuzz: I extremely dislike your abuse of caps.

[Fizz-and-Fuzz]

I EXTREMELY DISLIKE ALL OF UR COMMENTS!!!

[Kazehana Haiku-san]

Lol, again, im agreeing with Hiraku. It could use a bit more work on the time between the first and second parts to clear up the plot line a bit.

4/5

[Takagawa Yan]

hm i think u could've put a small bit of time between part 1 and part 2. in other words, more storyline. that is, unless this is supposed to be a oneshot type story. in that case, you wouldn't have to write it in two parts. i guess i'll wait of the next part for further judgement...

4/5