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Introduction
In a secret garden a magic door is hidden near a big old tree. That door can change everyone´s life. Gnomes and fairies lived there all is fantastic... but not all the time.By the years every kind of magic creature have a bad war that have separate each piece of land.Many special children get to a place they never see in their born land, the human´s world.
All you can see there was fail smiles,poor souls but if you´re lucky you can see many happy family.
Some of the special children get in a new beautiful family others in a separate family with only fights.This children will meet their real destiny, family and happiness, all only in one little gem, hidden in a secret place near the magic garden.
Any of this cases was the one of Sarah, a little child of 10 years that lost her parents in a terrible accident.
So she continue her life in a big and strict orphanage near the place her parents left to the heaven.
She wasn´t alone when the accident occured, Jake,her best friend also was there.He was like a big brother, even tough they where the same age.
Sarah was left in that incident only 2 things...her mother´s last words and a rare white flower that her mother gave in their way to their vacations.
Sarah´s mother last words where:Don´t get away of this place my dear...if you do...you will never see...what destiny have built for you...
- by -Tsuki-Saya- |
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- | Submitted on 02/07/2009 |
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- Title: Mysterious Garden
- Artist: -Tsuki-Saya-
- Description: In a secret garden all mysthic dreams can come true.
- Date: 02/07/2009
- Tags: mysterious garden
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Comments (6 Comments)
- -Tsuki-Saya- - 04/30/2009
- I have already actualized the introduction.Please comment if you like or if you dont...
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- Black_Velvet_Rose99 - 02/15/2009
- Build more, don't just snap to the point add fluff words and use a different vocabulary sometimes. Good storyline though.
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- Jellybean Julie - 02/08/2009
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WOW!
best story ive read so far - Report As Spam
- -Tsuki-Saya- - 02/08/2009
- Thanks by your coment I will continue this story
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- Jazziya - 02/07/2009
- Thats cool!!!!
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