- Once upon a time,When the ntime of our ancestors.There was a 15 year old boy named Zack, He is studying at a sword academy. There he met his teacher Sir Angeal. Sir Angeal is a great swordsman who had many adventures as tough defeating monsters like Cerberus,Chimera and Hydra. although it was just 10 years ago.He is now teaching Zack to be a great swordsman. He is always letting Zack do hard tasks, but Zack did not give up. On the age of 18, he is now a pro swordsman, he ventured 5 lands already and defeated the monster Medusa.When he went back to his hometown, he saw the land in flames. All the villagers panicing to escape the threat. When Zack went to his house. He saw his mother dead, Two persons did this. Then Zack draw his sword from his back and engage battle with the two people. But he was defeated and was unconcious.Then the two persons left him with a note said"I the on with the blue dress is Sephiroth and my partner with the red dress is Genesis, If you want your mother to be revived, there is still hope for her, but we have the potion, you must get it and defeat us if you want your mother to live, we will only wait for you in 50 days. That's all".When he was still unconcious,he cannot move and he almost died because of the heat of the flames, but angeal saw him and dragged him out of the village to a safe place. When he gained conciousness,he saw Angeal and the rest of the surviving people.Then Angeal let him read the note,when he was finished reading, his heart was full of anger and vein.Then he formed a group with 7 people,using the remaing citizens.They were called the Desgeia, with their leader Angeal, with their groupmates Zack the swordsman,Sharlack the hunter,Ifrin the mechanist,Calorio the axeman,Dedeius the lancer and their supporter Ezra. They began their journey in the large city of Pamazon.They talked to the government for help in finding Genesis and Sephiroth.But the government didn't mind them.They just turned back and left them like garbages,but Zack did not not allow this, he fought the governor in a 1-on-1 manlike match.Then Zack won. But the gorvernor did not accept defeat, he arrested them. Zack wanted to fight them, but Angeal forced him not to,they were too many, then they gave up.After 15 days, they broke out of jail because of the technology of Ifrin.They were shock of his amazing skill, he can make technology using dust,wood,scrap of metal and cloth. But they did not mind that any longer, because they had to find a way out to get out of the city, because they are now in the most wanted list. -PART 1-
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- Date: 02/07/2009
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- Cepheius - 02/07/2009
- When you make a story... be sure to divide each line into paragraphs and be sure that in the beginning of the paragraph, there should always be an indent.... but anyways nice work, but try using deep English terms, it improves the impact of the people. BRO! Tagalog ni oi! vote pud ako story beh 5/5 , 5 sad raba ako vote nimo!
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