- I was just going for a night time jog. I was gasping for air by the first mile. I HAD to stop. I saw a bench, and walked to it. when i sat down, it felt... warm. Toooo warm. i mean, it was 2 below outside, HOW COULD it be so warm? when i glanced down at the seat, i was hit in the back of the head with a crowbar. I was on the ground. I coud'nt look back, i was in too much pain. i was hit agine, blacked out instintly. when i woke up, i was in some some strange black robe. I was bleeding madly. i was laying on a bench. it was black, and kinda like the thing you sit down on in a docters ofice. I was blinking a lot, because, my vision was blury. i saw 2 man in front of me. they were talking. when they noticed i was awake, one walked to me, the other, to an old man across from me. he grabed me by the sholder, and lifted me up. my head was looking down, at my legs. they were cut badly, and bleeding a little bit. the man siad "get your head up. NOW!" when i looked at him he was wasn't wereing the robe like me. "take off the robe... now!". i did, but when i looked at my shirt, it had a bomb straped to it. "get up." both of the men comanded. i got up, but the old man didn't. "get.... UP!" the guy talking to him siad. but the old man didn't lisen. "okay..." the old man fianaly siad. but the man infront of me's pationc grow old." TOO LATE" he siad. he shot him with a gun he had. then he went behind me and forced me to walk. we went in a very creppy hallway. then we saw... we saw..... we saw somthing in the floor!!! it was charging at us! END OF PART 1. LOOK OUT FOR PART 2: What is that thing? THANKS FOR READING, AND DOINT WORRY... PART 2 WILL BE OUT SOON.
- by Tanner The Killer Panda |
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- | Submitted on 01/28/2009 |
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- Title: What happend?
- Artist: Tanner The Killer Panda
- Description: Yeahh.....
- Date: 01/28/2009
- Tags: happend
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- cinnamon roIIs - 03/19/2011
- Even though there's a few grammatical errors, it's cool smile
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- Tanner The Killer Panda - 02/01/2009
- Hey, i think your on now. it's alreddy out. and thanks for likeing it.
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- Tender Lavender - 01/31/2009
- cool when will part two be out. i like this story!!!!!!!! <3
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- Fallout_Elite - 01/29/2009
- nice one, tanner. =D too bad for you im not rating. muahahahaha
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