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The Blue-Eyed One
Now the story that you are about to hear has nothing to do with the
title, yet it has everything to do with the title. Let me explain, there
once was a young boy, about the age of eleven named Christopher
whose father was never around. He kept crying to his father saying,
“Daddy Drake, may I have a pet? I do not have a companion to talk
to for you are always gone. May I please have one father.”
“Are the servants not enough?”, Daddy Drake retorted in his deep
sophisticated manner of speaking.
“No Father, I want a pet to talk to. May I have a horse, cat, or dog
even? I will take care of it and the servants just have to feed it. I will
take a mutt even!”, pleaded lonely, lonely Christopher.
“Very well then, but if this animal gets to be trouble then it is out of
the door with ‘em. Are we under stood young man?,” he addressed to
his son giving him a rare half smile and squinting one eye at him, “I
will be departing in the morning to London. I will be back in precisely
four months. If you can find a dog and train him to be obedient then
you may keep the dog of your choice. If not… well you heard what I
said earlier.”
Christopher was elated. He could not believe that his father would
let him have a dog. When his father left that morning he set out to
find a dog, starting with the local merchants. He couldn’t find a dog.
Finally he came upon an elderly woman who was blind in one eye,
fore it was glazed over into a powdery bluish color, had hair of snow
white, and she was crippled. “M’ am, do you have any idea where I
might find a dog?”, he gingerly asked the woman.
“Yes, my fine young lad I do. Have you been near the river? There
is a man whose dog recently had pups. Tell him Lynn sent you to him.
He is a fine young chap”, she spoke as though it was hard to
breathe, as though she was sickly, but her demeanor seemed so
lively, joyous, and a bit cunning.
“Thank you kind woman and here are five shillings for your
trouble”, he spoke placing the five coins into her hand and closing
her cold, wrinkled fingers marked with the toils of life around the five
luke-warm pieces of metal. He set off to find this man by the river. He
found him about tea time, with his beautiful bluish-grey dog at his
side. When the dog looked up at him it had the most beautiful crystal
blue eyes that he had ever seen.
“What ye doin’ her’ boy?”, the tall, muscular man with brown hair
and eyes said pulling out his pile, leaving a smoke ring around his
head that looked much like a Christmas wreath.
“Lynn sent me sir. She said that ye dog recently had pups. I would
like to buy one from ye. I am willing to pay up to seven pounds.”,
Christopher spoke in a way in which he thought his father would have
said.
“I have but one left and its tail is a wee’ bit longer than usual. Is
that a problem lad?”, Christopher shook his head no, “Well I’ll go an’
get it. That dog is worth only five pounds”. He brought the dog out
and Christopher fell in love with her. It had the beautiful crystal blue
eyes of its mother and a glossy black coat that in the fading sunlight
shimmered a bluish-metallic tint. She had a bright pink tongue and
seemed to smile when she looked at you. Christopher paid the five
pounds and took the pup away from her mother only after she was
able to say goodbye.
As he walked down the long, rocky path, going uphill on the lush
green slope in the fading daylight of the sundown he clutched the
pup tightly in his arms. He looked upon the sun as it sank below the
horizon and said to the pup, “This sunset is beautiful, just like you my
friend. I think I will name you Aurora, after the beautiful dawning of
the sun.” She looked up at him with her bright eyes and blissful dog-
like smile and yipped quietly.
He was able to train the dog with the few months he had. By the
time his father returned she was well trained and highly obedient.
Daddy Drake was impressed and allowed Christopher to keep her as
long as she behaved. Aurora and Christopher did everything
together. She brought much joy, companionship, and respect in her
twelve years. When she died, the boy, who was now a man of twenty-
one, cried. He said, “This beautiful blue-eyed dog kept me going. For
that I thank her.” Those words were written on the headstone and her
remains were placed at the foot of where his body would one day lay.
So you see that we all have our dreams and purposes. The boy
found comfort in this dog, and the dog found a companion and friend
to be with always. The blue-eyed pup was the boys crutch to get
through hard times. heart
- by I Am Primrose Everdeen |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/26/2009 |
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- Title: The Blue-Eyed One
- Artist: I Am Primrose Everdeen
- Description: A short story i wrote for english class about a dog and a boy in Europe.
- Date: 01/26/2009
- Tags: blueeyed
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- iSpeakerBox - 07/26/2009
- T~T
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- -n o r m a l _ N O T - - 01/26/2009
- tats sweet, bet ur teacher was proud.
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