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Red Rose
Vianna gasped under the pressure that wayed down on her as she enter the room .
Chapter ~1~ : Breach Of Security
Bright blue eyes changing with the light zoomed in on her like an eagle with its pray . It let out a rowr , tried to come toward her but was siezed by the chained that clutched it .
Now she was on the ground gasping for air , her lungs compressed under an invisible barrior seemed to explode with every breath she tried to take.
" Breath " as smirks rised to its face " Breath " it said once more in a evily lingering voice , Via hung on dragging her way across the floor . The sun was finally begining to rise and its rays sun down into the shadows when out of the dark he came.
"Breath my dear so this force shall devour your soul " bending down to the floor he looked in her eyes red like the fire that burns , like the blood that pumped trough their vains , he held her head up from her chin.
"Red Rose"
A look came upon her face as she was thinking * He knows how does he know no one knows but us *
What will happen to Via
- Title: Red Rose Chapter 1
- Artist: Vilessie
- Description: Read the intro
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: rose chapter
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Vilessie - 02/22/2011
- Lol yeah ill definitely fix the spelling didnt notice them before xD , im working on chapter 2 my friends.
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- the_goddess_of_all_evil - 05/25/2009
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Good, just make sure to spellcheck next time. I made mistakes in my writing too. razz vOTE Back! 4/5
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- XxInnocent-FearxX - 05/17/2009
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Looking forward to it!
Msg me when its done ok?
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- Tachi Zotura - 01/19/2009
- interesting. i cant wait to see what comes next!
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- Rin seragaki - 01/19/2009
- I think it it's cute, keep up the good work >_o
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- fractalMonster - 01/03/2009
- I'm interested in what happens next..please hurry with the next chapter..the suspense is killing me!
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- akatsuki rikuna - 01/03/2009
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ahhh....that was cool but it feels too short. i dont have any right to say that so nvr mind.sry. but looking forward in wat will happen next
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