- I walk down the dimly lit hall. Riff at my heels like a loyal dog. I walk this hall often for at the end is my room. So why should I walk as if death waits for me there. I guess a sort of death does wait for me. I invite Riff into my room for a kind of death that only Cain, son of Adam can give. Not death of the body but death of the soul. A forbidden love.
- by Dark_Gale017 |
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- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: The Nobleman
- Artist: Dark_Gale017
- Description: I wrote this is a class and my teacher loved it but the class hated it.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: nobleman
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Comments (3 Comments)
- r33na1 - 04/21/2009
- it souds cool, but the punctuation is kinda wierd so the first ime i read it i didn't get it. It's really awesome though you should keep it going. please check mine out and tell me what u think. I'm new at this so...
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- Secondth - 03/15/2009
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It sounds real weird!
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- its raining kats - 12/14/2008
- well, it's a nice idea, but I'm not rather fond of how it's written... 3 stars?
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