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one more minute till we say
good bye
one more second for me to
cry
one more hour to talk on the
phone
one more step to make it
home
i noticed that its always you who is breakn my
heart
just that one more hope not to go to the movies today
yes,yes i herd that your dien to see me and that you really want me to forgive yo
well one more chain in the cycle
one more hope to get of here
one more song to
sing
one more time to say good
bye
- by PhoenixZeva |
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- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: One More Step
- Artist: PhoenixZeva
- Description: i was [playing guitar when i wrote a song i got upset soo i just posted it on here XD
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: guitar picks
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Misserable - 06/23/2012
- biggrin Amazing <3
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- SuperJoJo14 - 11/05/2010
- i like it a lot.
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- Vampire_Camilla_Cullen - 05/14/2010
- beautiful poem biggrin
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- ChocolateRooroo - 04/28/2010
- oh wow love it
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- Over Bitten Zombie - 12/19/2009
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- Stellar Witch - 09/28/2009
- oh and btw since voting is disabled 4/5
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- Stellar Witch - 09/28/2009
- its kinda too short to be a song but with some music put in, probably it would be alright. Nice work btw
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