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Kyle Joged Back Over Too His Friends.Then Alyssa Walks Up Too Marissa.
"So..I Saw You Talking Too Kyle!" Alyssa Says With Enthusiasm.
"Yea." Marissa Says With A Smile.
"Soo...What Happened,What Did He Say, Tell Me Tell Me!!"
"He Invited Me Too Go See A Movie With His Friends Thats All."
"Awww That Is So Cute!"
"Yea." Marissa Says With A Grin
"I Mean You Know He Is Really Hot!"
"Alyssa!" Marissa Nudges Her
"I Know, I Know,But You Got ome Competition."
Alyssa Points.Marissa Truns And Sees Becky Coolen. Shes Talking Too Kyle, Twirrling Her Hair Around Her Fingers,Giggling,And Touching His Shoulder.
"Oh God!...Becky!.. Of All People In The Freaking World Her!"
"Yep!"
Becky Collen Theres Not A Lot Of Things Too Say About Her Exept Shes The Most Popular Girl In School!... A Cheerleader A+ Student, Captian Of The Cheerleading Team, And Has All The Guys At Her Finger Tips. Worst Of All Her Looks! She Has The Looks That Every Girl Wish She Had. Her Long Blonde Hair,Skinny Body,And Her Perfect Make-Up.
"I Hate Her!"
"Everyone Does!" Alyssa Replys.
The Whistle Blows As Marissa Just Stares At Becky And Kyle Talking.Then She Walks Over Too The Coach And Sits In Her Spot.
After Lunch She WAlks Too Her Next Class.She WAlks In Sits In Her Spot And Class Starts.
"Is There Any Questions About Last Nights Homework?"
Marissa Raises Her Hand.
"Yes Mrs.Kinly!" The Teacher Responds.
"On Number 12 I Didnt Get The Second Half Of The Question."
"Ok Everyone Pay Attention!"
Mrs.Rence Turns Too The Board And Begins Writing.
"24x19(m)+199-L= Blank!..." She Says Outloud.
"Now The First Thing You Do Is Round The...."
Marissa Fades Off. She Just Cant Stop Thinking About Kyle And What Is Going Too Happen Tonight.
"What Am I Going Too Wear?." She Thinks Too Herself.
Someone Walking In The Hallway Catches Her Attention. She Looks Up And Spots Kyle. He Turns Too The Window And Sees Her. He Waves.She Waves Back.He Hold Up 4 Fingers And Says 4 O' Clock. She Nods Her Head.
"Ms.Kinly..Ms.Kinly Are You..."
"Yes Mrs.Rence!"
"Ok Did You Get How Too Do Number 12 Of Last Night Homework?"
"Yes. I Do."
Marissa Turns Around Too The Window Too See If Kyle Was Still There. It Was Empty.
Afetr School She Ran Home,Threw Her Stuff On The Green Flowered Couch. She Stopeed A Moment Too Smell The Air.
"Vanilla Candle." She Says Too Herself.
She Runs Upstairs And Passes By Her Dog Po-Go Running Down With One Of Her Brothers Shoes,Then Her Brother Runing After Him. She Quickly Gets Undressed And Jumps In The Shower.
"OWWWW!!" Marissa Screams
"You Ok Sweetie?" Her Mom Yells From Down Stairs.
"Yea.. I Just.. Got Soap..In My Eye!." Marissa Yells Back.
She Got Out Rapped The Towel Around Her And Stands In Front Of The Mirror. She Brushed Her Hair And Wonders What She Was Going Too Do With It.
(( TOO BE CONTINUED!)) eek cry
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- Title: I Love You Part 2
- Artist: --iiMaRiaH-CuPpYc0okiiE--
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u meet some new people!
p.s Happy Thankgiving! ;3
IF U HAVE BEEN FOLOWING ALONG WITH MI STORIES THANK YOU SO MUCH I LOVE YOU GUYS! =) - Date: 11/27/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- X-Mehki-X - 11/28/2008
- like i said it so funneh xDD
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- --iiMaRiaH-CuPpYc0okiiE-- - 11/28/2008
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Yes Yes I Meant Rapped..
And I Think Its More Interesting When I Type With Capital Letters.
And I Know My Spelling And Grammer And Other Stuff Isnt That Good We're Human So Just Shut Up And Deal With It.
And Too Get This 1 You Have Too Read The First 1.
Thanks 2 The People That Like It I Love You Guys =3 - Report As Spam
- Echidnachimerax - 11/27/2008
- she got out and RAPED the towel around her...u mean rapped
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- x iRyan x - 11/27/2008
- =)
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- Remy Lafayette - 11/27/2008
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First, capital letters don't go everywhere. Only with proper nouns and the start of a sentence or dialogue. That's it!
Also....grammar. =(
Too is used for adding stuff. Like "Me too!" or "Yes I talked to him too." It's not used to say "Too Do With It".
<.< Watch the grammar, and the capitilization and you'll be fine. - Report As Spam