The story of a fallen hero

• Artist: x_iSapphirefox14_x
• Description: This is the story of Aleria the Daughter of a fallen hero. Part one.
• Date: 11/10/2008
• Tags: death fallen hero

I am Aleria. Some Days i wonder who i really am. My father is a fallen hero sentenced to death wrongly by the king.
King George the fifteenth was a cruel man he said i wil pay you price for your daughter my father refused because he knew i was the only thing left he had of my mother. My mother also died a wrongful death George's father the 14th george sentenced her to death after having my and my brother for we were suppose to be his children i beg to differ. My brother nicholas is in England with Grandma. I wanted to go but no I was forced to stay.
My dad is concerned. I am not what is 2 worry when i am safe.

Comments

[Chombi]

why put a 2 in the sentence??? "I am not what is 2 worry when i am safe" I dont even understand what that means. Oh and just for your info 2 isnt a word its a number, you dont have to be lazy when writing specially if you add it to an arena. X.x

[Zaitin]

uhh, bad grammar, using 2 for a word, and nothing at all interesting = no good rating for you.