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The Unseen Girl
Chapter 1: The new school
Now I will tell you about a period of my life I will never forget, this story is about my first and only love…
“Ann hurry or you will be late for your first day at your new school!” My mom yelled at me, I slowly got out of bed and tripped on the way out to the bathroom, I fell and landed as long as I were, I slowly got up and continued my way to the bathroom, I looked into the mirror only to see a pale face with green gray eyes and somewhat blond hair, I just stood there glazing into that mirror doing nothing but thinking, I wondered about what would happen when I got to school later on…
//Who am I?? I like to think that I’m Annabel Pandora, but I’m not so sure anymore, that I know who I am, but that’s ok, I have only been on this earth for about 14 years so it’s all cool//
I was still staring at my mirror reflection when I remembered that I had to hurry, I quickly took all of my nightclothes of and took a shot and hot shower. I stepped out of the bath and took the towel in the little cabin besides the shower. I dried myself and took the towel around my body and walked into my room to get some clothes, I was looking in what felt like half n hour, before I found my favorite set of clothes; a pair of dark blue jean-shots and a big black tee with a skull on and of course my favorite pair of booths, they were going on-the-half-way to the knee their color was of course black.
- Title: The Unseen Girl (Start of)
- Artist: Greenmee
- Description: Hii.... This is the start to my new story on Quizilla.com.... The full story will be out the 19. Okt 08 (on Quizilla), so please if you like the start please go in then and read the rest.... And please leave a message here on Gaia and say what you like in the story as far, if thats ok :3
- Date: 10/16/2008
- Tags: unseen girl start
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Fayne Darkness - 02/24/2009
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I agree with the other two, but not the first person.
If it was longer, and more interesting of a title, it would be good. - Report As Spam
- Deadlysweet6 - 02/15/2009
- not to be mean but this was a bad begining only cause of the 'who iam i' part if that was cut it would be better
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- visared_of_doom - 10/16/2008
- you write well it's definitely good if your trying to just grab people's attention before the whole story comes out. If you can you should change a few names lengthen the story come up with a catchy title and get it published.
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- Kanillo - 10/16/2008
- Den er god, Louise. 5/5
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