- It was dark,cold,rainy, and thier was a crime in The Village Of The Hidden in the Sand. The hokagas tryed to stop the crime, but they failed. One hokagas that survived, quickly called the Naruto and his clan. Naruto and the others rushed to the crime quickly by thier telaportation justsu. Soon as they got thier they looked for the crime, Naruto asked, "Is it me or does tht explosion has something to do with it". They ran quickly to the crime. They were just on time, the expiosion was made paper bomb. Naruto's clan quickly attended the crime. Garra, one of Naruto's greatest enemy's, tryed to use his sand barrel justu but his chakora was low. Naruto punched Garra's face. Garra smiled, he uper kicked Naruto on his face. Garra's faced was made out of sand his face quickly recovered. Sakae used his fireball justu. Naruto's clan went to the tower of gelel to retrive the stone of gelel. His clan reterned to The Village Hiden in the leafs. Garra wants to hunt them. twisted
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- | Submitted on 10/11/2008 |
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- Title: Naruto And Legend Of Gelel
- Artist: tojacks123
- Description: This is a story about a kid and his clan.
- Date: 10/11/2008
- Tags: narutoandthelegendofthestoneofgelel
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Comments (4 Comments)
- gjdfskgskd - 10/11/2008
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Um... sorry...
But work a little harder please...
And you spelled Gaara wrong...
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- WickedScientist - 10/11/2008
- Well if this is suppose to be a Fanfiction the its not very good. You have bad spelling and grammar. The characters are OOC (out of character) this makes no sense in the fandom. And you don't have any paragraphs. I am not even sure what the story is suppose to be about.
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- HoRnEd_SpiRiT - 10/11/2008
- I guess this fan fiction is pretty cool. But try making something original.
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- Raiden297 - 10/11/2008
- Dude, what the heck. It's an actual movie. It's supposed to be original.
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