Silent Screams.

• Artist: Vikki-182
• Description: Something I wrote for English last year.
  
  Short but I hope you like.
  
  My english teacher was reduced to tears by this. xD
• Date: 10/06/2008
• Tags: silent screams

Silent Screams

I stared at the person looking back at me. I instantly despised her. I saw her daily; her past haunted my every dream. She was everything that I hated. She had a lot of secrets, and demons too. Her evil grin reminded me of why I was here. She glared at me as if she didn't like me. Apart from the bloodied razor she held in her shaking hand, she stood dead still. Her arms were deeply slashed as fresh blood ran over old scars. Mascara stained her cheeks and every tear fell straight down, hitting the ground almost instantly. I watched a little longer before turning away from the mirror.

Comments

[frey_089]

.... speechless ...

[Archfiend Azrael]

Well, in my opinion, it pertains no real message, it's simply a paragraph about self-hatred and emo-ish blah feelings. It lacks true detail of pain, the girl has no understanding of pain and most likely wants attention.
And Cutting. What a perfect way to get around civilization, there are better ways to deal with pain, stress, and bad memories. Frankly, I'm going to be biased against it due to sheer lack of talent and emo-ness, but hey, that's how I feel.

[grimcreeper2]

ohhh..interesting...kinda creepy....intresting though...

[JellyfishSpine]

nice!

[l Vio l]

I love ur story @ 1st i was stuck but then @ the end u made it clear good job biggrin *(dats a golden star lol)