A Halloween Scare...! =o

• Artist: LulaLuv
• Description: Its just a Halloween start! Also Post what u will be for halloween!
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: halloween scare

As the girl with brown long hair and blue sparkled eyes Steped on the top of the mountin she looked up. But below her was a bloody ghost! "AHH!" She screamed. "Who are u? Why are you after me?!". "I'm The one u..killed! Im The one u killed! Im the one..." he said while he disapeard. She sighed. But then he poped up right behind her. She Screamed while the ghost took over her body. So the ghost grabs his mighty Axe and Stuffs it right in her head. He escapes while no one saw. So no one ever knew how this happened...No one knew if she killed someone.. but we all know that She was killed. At her Highschool they set up A funeral. Her friends sobbed.. Her family cried as hard as they can.. but the ghost looks down and laughs in a cruel way. "What was that?!" Mary ,her best friend, said. "I don't know.. I'm scared.." Her other friend, Malisa studderd. So the ghost swoops down and kills everyone in the school. It was a horifing night that happend.. The school remains haunted... All is left is the bloody ghost in the gym.. the school is still open.. but the spirt is gone. So every time they enter the gym.. all they heard was screaming...

THE END!

Comments

[Chucky Bread-Head]

Uhm, what the hell? Why in the world would you put this on here? There is no logical standing, and there is no structure. It needs more work than anything ever, yet you put it on here. Why? It's just...cruel to real writers.

[Xx Kiki xxX]

what the s**t is this its crap! needs a lot of work a LOT bt I gess its a good try well done and don't keep on writting u
nless yo have a spell checker and a vocablary list.! 2/5

[KayleyV2]

The story is incredulous and is composed very poorly.

[devious culprit]

*sighs*
this doesn't work--ghosts don't behave that way, do your research

[LulaLuv]

I will be A witch or.. or a cheerleader.. Also look how I Look.. >=)