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It was a dark and damp floor that I was blindfolded and seated upon. I could feel their presences those loathsome creatures theses humans were they were all pointing their weapons at me whether it be gun, knife, sword, or even the fist of the martial artist. I sat there on the stone paved ground and thought was it really worth it, was it really worth it to die for the people I had only met a couple days ago. So I as I sat there quavering like a leaf they decided on my fate, someone yelled let him go and I was killed on the very spot, now you might ask me who did not obey orders and what I was, but you see I have no clue what I am still to this very point, I have now destroyed all remains of my killer so I am as they call me the Decapitator.
- Title: Death And Decapitation
- Artist: killer789
- Description: Pretty much Just the begining of my awesome story
- Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: death decapitation
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Comments (4 Comments)
- hazuinf - 08/06/2010
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Worse than bad grammar.
Random plot (so far).
1/10
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- Blue Overlord - 09/12/2008
- It started out very good, but the last sentence ended it a bit abruptly. 3/5
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- Clevergirl14 - 09/12/2008
- Wow this is like so cool and a bit dark
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- dpatlakh - 09/12/2008
- not bad...
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