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"Jake! Stop it you loser watch somebody is actually going to stop and pick us up" my dads old pick-up truck was messing up so Jake and I pulled over so I could check out what was up. You'd think Jake would be the one working on the car seeing as how he is the guy friend,but he's clueless when it comes to cars. So instead he was being useless holding out his thumb to passing drivers.Most of the time they looked at him weird but he just laughed. "We are broke down,Lilly and I have food to eat at home" he walked over to the car and leaned in through the passenger door.He switched through the radio stations and finally stopped at a station that was playing the song 'Corona and Lime' by.Shwayze.
"Ohmygoshers!!"I giggled. "I love this song" Jake looked at me for a second. "You are amazingly crazy Lilly" I smiled. Jake was my best friend;had been for years.But over those years,I had wished for a really long time that he would see me in a different light. He hadn't and the fact that I liked him was probably the only secret I ever kept from him. "I think it'll work now." I stepped back and put my hands on my hips.I wiped the side of my hand across my forehead and Jake started laughing at me. "What?"I looked confused at him "You have grease all over your forehead now "He smiled and walked towards me "Here,let me see the rag" he held out his hand and I placed the dirty rag I was holding in his palm.Then he stepped in front of me and put his face close to mine so that he could get all the gunk off my face. He was close. Really close. Like I could feel him breathing and feel him. Like he wasn't touching me but I could feel him. So if I had my eyes closed I would know he was there. I looked at him with sad eyes "What?" he said almost too quietly "Nothing" I thought about kissing him but I couldn't move. I tried and yelled at myself inside but I wouldn't move. I just closed my eyes not wanting to look at him anymore, feeling teased. I waited for what felt like hours but was merely seconds. Then I felt him. Closer to me,touching me.Against my chest. Against me just there I was going to open my eyes but as soon as I was going to,he was kissing me.I was freaking out on the inside.And before I could open my eyes to look at him,he moved.
"I'm done its all gone" he smiled like nothing happened and then,Corona and Lime turned into an infomercial.
- by KookieMunster154 |
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- | Submitted on 08/17/2008 |
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- Title: Corona and Lime.
- Artist: KookieMunster154
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Description:
I am a sucker for cutesy little love story type things.
This is only a beginning I don't really plan on adding anything but I might write other little stories if people like this one.I do want you to be harsh.I want you to tell me why you like it or why you don't.Destructive criticism.
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Thanksss. - Date: 08/17/2008
- Tags: lovestory
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Kombat Kitty Kat - 01/28/2011
- And cheak some of mine out too if and when I post them! wink
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- Kombat Kitty Kat - 01/28/2011
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Totally amazingly great!!!!! Keep writing girl!!!! I might post some of my little romance stories also,,,,so you should add me!!!!!
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- asg7595 - 10/04/2008
- aww i lov it i am such a sucker for cutesy love stories too i am writing one myself too.oh i forgot, add me (my other me lol) asg7585 its my more richer account
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