-
http://www.ezthemes.com/previews/m/myswingsdt.jpg
[pegasus]
Everybody thinks that pegasus's are fake.Well Lilly doesn't think so.Lilly my friend's is a pegasus.Go ahead and laugh.Yes get it all out of your system.There you go. Now listen as I tell you Lilly's story.
Lilly looked up at her mother.She has just been born.Her mother Mary nuzzled her softly.She pushed Lilly with her nose to help her stand.Finally with all her might she stood up,wobbling at first but she got better.Her coat dazzled in the moonlight.Her fur was white and beautiful.Same as her Mother's.Her wings were huge and pure.Her eye's were blue,but not regular blue,ocean blue.Her mother's were emerald green.
"My dear,Lilly,you learned how to stand quickly let's see how you fly".Mary whispered.
*gulp*"Fl-fl-fly"?Lilly stuttered.
Her mother nodded"Yes my dear just flap your wings and watch me".
Her mother flapped her wings gracefully and was up in the air quicker than you can say "mother may i"
Lilly tried but when she got above ground she fell and hurt her head.She tried a countless number of time's.Finally she got it right and flew up alongside her mother."Mother look I'm doing it"!She screamed.
"Yes I see,you are fairly good at this".Mary told her child.
They flapped there wings and flew off into the night.
- Title: Lilly the Pegasus.Part 1
- Artist: Poopy1011
- Description: Before you go posting nasty comments about any mispelled word's keep in mind my sister that is 8 wrote this.I think it's pretty good for her age.Please she will be seeing the comments so don't say anything hurtful.She love's writing and wants to be a writer when she grow's up.Anyway this is part 1 of her story.Please look for part 2 that should come out soon.
- Date: 08/13/2008
- Tags: pegasus
- Report Post
Comments (6 Comments)
- Dolly Akezai - 09/21/2009
- aw thats so cute! ^^ tell your sis to keep it up!!! She might be the best writer ever in the future!
- Report As Spam
- Jellybean Julie - 03/25/2009
-
tell ur sister she is a guud writer and keep on wurking towardz her dreams
it was the best story ive read so far lol - Report As Spam
- Th3 Pur3 - 02/05/2009
-
That is lovley.
I was like that at my age,And i still am smile
tell your sis I hope she gets a career in writing heart - Report As Spam
- Shimmering_Leaves - 01/04/2009
- Aww, very cute. keep writing! :]
- Report As Spam
- Rainbow Chip Cookie - 08/13/2008
- Wow this is pretty good! Tell your sis to keep writing and she'll be AMAZING at it! ^^
- Report As Spam
- kittypuss123 - 08/13/2008
- hehe tell your lil sisy to keep writing and when shes older shell be magnificent!
- Report As Spam