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Prologue
Humans. They’re so self-centered, thinking they’re the only intelligent life forms. My people have been living for at least 10,000 years longer than them and Earth is the only planet to not be under my control.
Yes, my control. I am Queen Nakatia, I rule the universe from the planet Ophena. I have ruled for 2,000 years now. But my planet is in a panic. The King has just died, after 5,000 years seeing as that’s as long as each ruler lives.
Wait, what? Why am I 2,000 years old and the King dead?
When created, the first queen was the only ruler but after 2,000 years she crowned a king. As king and queen, they live 5,000 years from the day crowned. And not human years either; ours is much longer than theirs.
Anyway, after the first king the opposite ruler would live 3,000 years after the crowning of the other.
Oh, yes, the problem. Well normally when the king or queen dies, on the same day a child that’s just been born would have a bright light to its aura that everyone could see. This light would stay for 5 years if never crowned. Then special people could see the light only for another 5 years, after that you need a zirloc crystal, it’s a crystal that can detect a rulers aura. The parents of the child could be on any planet, but only Earth isn’t under my control, but it’s a law to give up the child.
The problem is that no one has reported a child having the Ruler aura. My people are is a panicked state, if our rivals, the Bersirese or the people of Bersir, find out it could be their chance to attack and take control! But all I can do is wait......
3 days. It’s been 3 days since the King died and still no one has reported a child. I’m starting to worry….
- by shadowofmyself |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: To Rule Them All
- Artist: shadowofmyself
- Description: I've this story on my mind for a long time but never wrote it down. But then I started Driver's Ed and was bored out of my mind! So I started writing it and got the prologue done. It's just a small sample and I don't know what I'm going to do with it. Tell me what you think.
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: ruler queen
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Cityface McGruff - 07/16/2008
- Its nice, but in the 'wait, what' section, there ought to have been more humor post start-off. Otherwise, very nice.
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- ChillinGrl - 07/16/2008
- its nice
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- Mossy Cow - 07/16/2008
- I like it, and can't wait to hear more.
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