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I'm Clarice... I'm an Emo... I'm broken hearted... I'm still young. I'm only 12 yrs. old. But my world is so freaking. I have many problems in life... Now, my father's job is in danger because the stock market had a terrible lost. And my crush is a teacher. And I'm broken hearted cuz he had a girlfriend now... My grade got low... And now, I'm sensitive and emotional... I always have emotional disease... I like to cry than to laugh... My bestfriend and my friends don't like me now... My Gaia Friends leave me now... And I feel I'm the only one in this world... I feel I'm going to be crazy... But I know... God is always beside me... Then I realize that my family loves me... But how can I get rid of problems?
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- by Ayumi Clarice The Emo Gal |
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- | Submitted on 10/01/2008 |
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- Title: What's hidden in me...
- Artist: Ayumi Clarice The Emo Gal
- Description: It is about hidden thoughts...
- Date: 10/01/2008
- Tags: whats hidden
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Julia Dream - 10/01/2008
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First off, this is grammatically terrible - your sentences break off in the middle for no apparent reason, and I get the feeling that English isn't your first language.
Also, it comes off as extremely annoying and whiny. People have problems. Cry a river, build a bridge, and get over them. - Report As Spam
- Umnusman - 10/01/2008
- im not a racist but seriously if you wan't a good advice then get up and move on, and about your friends try showing you feelings for them, don't be shy, your story has alot of feelings and i know how your feeling in some way, 3/5
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