Fur Over Fangs

• Artist: Paranormaly Stated
• Description: Andrew had a normal life. Friends, Family, and School. But when his Mother starts getting quiet and his brother seems more close to him things seem to change around him. His physical self seems to grow stronger and faster, his mental self has become more intelligant. When he turns eighteen and figures out the truth, will he live to tell a unknown legened or die for what he is?...
  
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  Written By: a.k.a Ashley Cullen
• Date: 09/29/2008
• Tags: over fangs werewolf vampire fiction

Prolouge

" No! Don`t! " A girl screamed loudly. I lurched myself into the firey pit. The fire was large and hot. It was like looking into the center of hell. A black smog was clinging to a marble, white body. I ran straight forward at the thing. I took a strong bite at its shoulder. It felt cold as ice and hard as stone in my mouth. Then I was thrown back into a wall. As I tryed to move, scrambleing around, I saw a woman. She was as beautiful as anyone I had ever seen. I stared into her eyes and saw fear, down into her soul. A sharp pain in my back made me blink. I re-opened my eyes. The beautiful woman was replaced by a small cute little girl. She had shared the same fear as the woman. I heard a snap of bones, blood covering my sight. Then darkness...

Comments

[metodo]

that sounded kinda weird yet interesting. i'd like to know what happens next. you could put a bit more emphasis on detail though. What did this person bite? Why did this person bite whatever it did? What was this thing it bit exactly? If you dont wanna tell what it is, then describe the shape or something so we can get a better image.