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  • Freebie that I did.
  • Title: Freebie that I did.
  • Artist: XxEveryHeartxX
  • Description: This is one of my first drawings. I think I did pretty good.
    Contructive critism is loved. <3
  • Date: 09/21/2009
  • Tags: freebie
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 09/24/2009
  • -continuing-
    is more bulgey than the other). What I might suggest is working on your anatomy and also study on angles of the person. Such as, picture in your mind (with the detail that you have) of what exactly you should angle the character and what would it look like if it was in that angle. You should also try doing what's called a skeletal system (I'll post an example link in the next following post) to help you with lopsided parts. And one last thing; work on shading. Try to shade in small
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 09/24/2009
  • Nice, however drawing on lined paper sort of ruins the picture. I heard there was a way you could bleach the lines, but I seemed to have forgot how to do that. Excuse me >.<.
    Anyway, the anatomy needs work. The shoulders are lopsided as well as the chest blades and chin. The whole body are also jumping angles like the cat ears are at a 3/4 angle while the face is more leaning toward a 1/2 angle (and the neck down is front view). The chest down to the waist could also need work (one of the hips
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