- Title: Japanese Schoolgirl
- Artist: shuukaaku
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Description:
I was trying to redraw a picture that I saw in a manga drawing book of a japanese schoolgirl. Tell me if you think it needs work, and what to work on, etc.
Constructive criticizm, people!
p.s. it's just a sketch that i drew in 10 minutes so it's not all cleaned up and stuff...
p.s.s. please comment what you think and what you rated! thank you! - Date: 07/21/2009
- Tags: japanese schoolgirl
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Comments (7 Comments)
- puppywithuzi - 08/09/2010
- i find the torso small and the legs a lil long but besides that its good
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- HoshikawaAkari - 08/22/2009
- she looks chubby o.o
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- mtdewgirl622 - 07/23/2009
- you should make the body longer and work on the eye a bit more. otherwise, it's really good for only 10 min
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- xDianaRAWR - 07/23/2009
- Looks Really Nice ;3
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- spastic jaki - 07/22/2009
- really cute! 5/5
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- The Great Pumpkin Waltz - 07/22/2009
- looks like Kagome's outfit with shortsleeves. Mabye if you coloured it to make it look identical as the reference picture. heart other than that 4/5
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- jeccazn - 07/21/2009
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hmm.. you should make the top body longer and shorten the legs (like what the other dude said lol).
other than that, it's VERRRYY goood biggrin - Report As Spam
