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- | Submitted on 02/28/2010 |
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- Title: whiteday high pg.3
- Artist: Catolic_Demon
- Description: yus, i finished page three! XD working on page four :3 i hope you all like it! Im not the best, so tell me what i can improve on, and if your going to be mean, dont comment D: thankies!
- Date: 02/28/2010
- Tags: whiteday high
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Xx_Luv Hellsing_xX - 06/07/2010
- couldnt really read it that good but very well drawn nice job dear
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- Veritas Fate - 05/12/2010
- it would be nice if you changed up the shots a little bit. Too many panels with just faces. And definitely spread them out. Panels should fit together, like this: http://dreamless.keenspot.com/d/20090105.html or even closer if you want.
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- - A Super - - 03/27/2010
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I LOVE IT!!
The only thing I think you could make better is space.
SPREAD those boxes out and give those characters some breathing space!
Other then that it's amazing, beautiful side views by the way!
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